Thursday, September 2, 2010

This Class Can Take the Heat!

Today we talked about repetition in a poem, and we talked a little about metaphor, too. Here is the class' work:


My  Bike


The  first  time
I  rode  a  two-wheeler
I  went  fast
The  tires  were  bumpy
Like  monster  truck  tires
The  bell  was  ringing
Like  a  car's  horn
The  gears  were  turning
Like  lightning
I  love  my  two-wheeler


See you next Tuesday. Have a great weekend!
Mr. Fleischer

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